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The Way Down

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The liquid pours like rain.
It kills the sorrow,
as it kills the brain.

The heart beats in vain.
It beats for lost love,
and beats in deep pain.

The girl hopes, to no gain.
Fights to stay awake,
and fights to stay sane.
I'm not entirely sure what's going on inside my head, but this was the result.
Wasn't even meant to rhyme, it just happened.
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I get the "liquid" as in self-medication. And the necessity of it with a lust for unity and peace of psyche is self-killing. But the problem of living with a disunited self is worse. Interesting catch-22.